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Monday 29 August 2016

The very angry garden

The very angry garden.
A long time ago there were 3 faires named Abby,Luke,A-j and they all lived with there mum lucy.

One day after they came back from their school trip they walked passed a garden.They were thinking what is that garden luke said let’s go check it out.They all went inside they were so excited that they made so much noise.

That the garden came alive and trapped them in a cage they never knew that the garden was magical and ancient.They were so scared that they made even more noise and the heared a loud roar that lions came the 3 kids were  so scared that even snakes came all those animals wanted to eat them a few seconds later the mum was worried about her kids.

She got up and started searching for them she looked around the park the pools she looked at school she couldn't find them anywhere she stop and she heard screaming she thought it could be her kids.She took a pic and it was her kids she ran into the garden to save her kids She looked and looked for them everywhere She even heard roaring it got louder and louder she knew that she was so close.Then she spotted her kids and yelled My kids you're all alive!! Stay calm sing a Lullaby and the lions will go to sleep and the snakes will go away and they sang twinkle twinkle little star the lions tried to keep their eyes open but the struggled so then the lions couldn't hold it any much longer.So then the lions went to sleep and the snakes got so annoyed the they block their ears and went they went far far away so they can never hear that song again the mother tried to sneack very qwuitly.And she got her kids out of the cage very qwuitly they went home reallyqwuit so that the lions dont wake up they ran home just incase so when they got home they had some hotchoclate and some cockes they lived happly ever after
The End.

1 comment:

  1. Some fabulous ideas Luisa. Don't forget you can add an image to make it more interesting.

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